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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Dawn First light New day comes Bringing joy and delight Sun Streaks through Rays of warmth Covering me and you Kiss Open arms Here with you Safe from all harm Love Gentle touch Holding your heart This means so much ---------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Just lovely Sven  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tender and sveet, as always, me Sven....applauding you once again... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Beautiful and gentle. Dawn First light New day comes Bringing joy and delight Sun Streaks through Rays of warmth Covering me and you Kiss Open arms Here with you Safe from all harm Love Gentle touch Holding your heart This means so much ======================== "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-21-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such peaceful thoughts...lovely verse... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a way to wake up! Beautiful, Sir Sven.  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My very favorite time of day, my friend....  Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle Grace.. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nicely done Sven! K |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Could someone please pass me a kleenex????? Marina |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Hey Sven! That was a wonderful poem! *Applauds* I look forward to much more, and real soon! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven-- your amazing talent continues to shine in this one. your work always makes me smile...thank you. and as always this was BEAUTIFUL! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
great poem..simple words..yet i could see what you were writing as if i was there watching with you :] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . DA, always nice to hear from you, I do miss your replies. . . serenity, thank you very much!! *bowing* brian, your re-format is interesting. . . thanks for the suggestion. . . Claire, thank you, it's always nice to hear from you. . . deVine, yes, it is a wonderful way to wake up. . .unless it's raining. . . Nan, thanks... mine too, and is that a challenge phrase I see there? Consider it done. . . Severn, thank you so much. . . Marina, here you go. . .would you like to keep the box? Dawn, I would never be one to disappoint such a reuqest!! Thank you. . . Aimster, thank you. . . glad that I can bring something to your day!! Crystal, first, welcome my friend to Passions, and second, thank you so much for your reply. . . I'm glad that I could paint such a picture for you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Well. with your poetry lately, i am afraid I may be in need of more then one box. Marina |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aah if only my dawn's were that beautiful! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, I have all the Kleenex you can imagine. . . Isis, have you been looking at the same sunrises that I have? ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Another lovely one, you are definitely on a roll! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Lovely, enjoyed the read. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven as usual your expression is tops 10/10 Lovely poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, I missed some people here!! Corinne, Sy, tracie, and vandana...thank you all!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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