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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I am his muse, his words, how they flow from his pen, To thy hand, Creating me, his love, as a poet to poetry, A painter with a canvas, Inside his words are the protraits of my heart, drawing each outline of my being, with every word expressed or written, I am the dancer to his dance, The singer to his song, He stares in his trance, looking at me all day long, Unto his sheet of paper I find, How his quill, his pen, his hand, Has touched mine, Without the skin, But beautiful words, Such words I breathe in, I hold his words up to my chest, Close to my heart, I feel his passion for me, His love, his heart, Beating as a drum, He listens... He begins to write, Slow and then faster, A passionate dancer, Gazing at me with his joyous smile, He looks, closes his eyes and writes his style, He writes about my red lips, my long silky hair, My gifts, my passion, my love, the way I care, In awe I am, So tenderly drawn out, so beautifully displayed, Carved by his hands, his words, his poetry, This is his view of me, I am his creation, His inspiration, I am now the poet, he is now MY muse... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-22-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That was beautiful, "His inspiration, I am now the poet, he is now MY muse" a wonderful poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Romantic one, you could be anyone's muse. How lucky a man would be to be yours. Very nicely done.......... |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
i am going through that right now. the tables have turned. now he says how is he ever to catch up? does this sound like a contest? what to do? ~Lorraine~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Whoever he is, he is one lucky guy!! Wow!! Great writing, my friend.  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Romantic Heart, I loved this! It seemed so very real, it was breathtaking. Wonderful! David2 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent poem!! An interesting situation, what happens when the poet becomes the muse? Wonderfully handled!!! Very good. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"He writes about my red lips..my long silky hair..My gifts, my passion, my Love, the way I care. In awe of him, So tenderly drawn out, so beautifully displayed. Carved by his hands, his words, his poetry. This is his view of me, I am his creation, his inspiration." Romantic these particular lines are the most beautiful poetry I have ever read...it flows so beautifully and gracefully and best of all these lines are warm and tender. James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Brian...Thank you, most gracious I am for thy sweet reply of beautiful Michael...I am flattered and in awe of your words, they encourage me, any woaman would be blessed to have you as her poet.. Lor...I know, I have a few secret muse's on Passions who inspire me from their poetry, which creates a better poet in me. Lone...hey, my friend, we both know I have a favorite muse Your friendship means alot to me David..It is real, written from the heart, about ??? my mystery muse, whoever he is? Thank you David I am touched by your reply Sven...It is intrigueing isn't it, like a fire, a fuel, feeding off of anothers passion, when someone writes about me, it inspires me to write about them...thanks for wonderful compliments James..you sure know how to make a poets heart melt, I am blushing at such honorable words of kindness thank You Your reply was warm and tender to my heart [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-22-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Romantic Heart, yes indeedy, writing about red lips, and long silky hair.... and your gifts? and your passion,  yes I would like more info on that. This is a wonderful poem and a little elusive, layered with sweet secrets... Like chocolate, sweet and creamy that melts on your tongue, a taste that begs for more. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, RH! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Parker...All you have to do is ask? Or shall I display my chocolate in poetry form in reply to your question? Denise...Thanks your a beautiful poet and friend! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Incredible inspiration....like none other! ~~excellent writing~~RM A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, just loved this, I have always wished for a poet "love" to write about me...and now...lol...after reading this I want it even more! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Danny your the man! Thanks for your tender sweet words, sir Halloway! Cor..Yes me too...love to have SOMEONE write poetry about me..I am still having lingering effects from Balladers Poem in open 6...I'll never get over that one..whew!! |
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