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ashley cain
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since 2000-05-12
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Texas

0 posted 2000-05-20 10:38 AM


    See me standing here in the early morning light.  No one wants to look at me for I give them fright.

    My freinds all abandoned me when they saw the tears in my eye.  I never would listen when my mother told me not to cry.

     So here I am weeping in Dallas.  Somewhere, someone might not forget us.


 

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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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1 posted 2000-05-20 07:15 PM


I find these few lines extremely intriguing, and would love to read more. Do you have more to this or more pieces to follow?



 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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