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The Wicked Wind |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Wicked Wind The wicked wind blows harsh tonight shattering my windows one and all, the scarecrow in the garden reduced to minute particles of blowing debris. The wicked wind has a bounty tonight nothing shall escape from it's wrath, the smiling daffodils pulled by their roots left dying on the surface of destruction. The wicked wind whispers to me tonight relaying a message I failed to recall the nightmares that tango with your mind were once just a whisper of breeze in time. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous writing, Gloria. Those wicked winds can sure wreak havoc, can't they? Very well expressed. Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes.... You do write best when your mind is racing, my friend... This is really good..  |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Great poem and very tantalizing in image. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Winds can be wicked my dear, but remember, it's the wind that sets the white dandelion free....Remembering blowing those as kids? Heck, I still do sometimes....Makes me think. I think I'll do a poem on that! Thanks for the inspiration girl! LOL I'll dedicate it to you. Blow winds blow!  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This piece was very much enjoyed. A vivid picture and a great expression. Strong sentiments. |
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