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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Wounded Through Armour Does my heart still breathe? Bearing my wounds Won’t let me be Protecting me from This pain I see Constructed walls Help hide my need To feel no hurt No tear, No rain This life We had Was it in vain? Colored dreams Painted to show Not what's inside This burning slow Sorrow lives To learn must I Endure this pain Not live this lie Tomorrow give Me light to see A way to shed A smile on me. For with each line I write to thee I shed a tear For love won't be Anymore |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice work - and so sad...  K |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Written in tears...and replied to in kind... Still pain beneath the armour tho...keep that in mind...Hear to listen any time... Sounds odd to call pain beautiful, but this is.... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Severn Serenity, you know why I have written this and am thankful you are there to talk to. "Hugs" Rich |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hi SPiked, I guess I believe the old way of think, pain reminds us that we are alive, it is there to be defeated not to defeat you. that was a powerful poem, I hope that your pain heals. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Brian there is no more honest feeling than hurt. one of the hardest to hide |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spiked~ Rich - herein lies your hope 'Tomorrow give Me light to see A way to shed A smile on me.' The light will shine the secret is to know it will come. I enjoyed the expression of your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wanted to read this again--then I wanted EVERYONE to read it again...so Back To Top--just like you will be again...smiles... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Marge am very thankful to have been able to touch you. Rich Serenity: as always better to have you at my side. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Spiked, This is to the point and very truthful, and as serenity said a MUST read poem, very well done thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
thank you very much Cerenity-1 Glad to have so much support from so many Rich |
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