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Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
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0 posted 2000-05-19 05:42 PM


To my husband...

The winds of life are trying to pull us apart,
but we dont walk hand in hand,
we walk heart in heart.
A bond was formed by our souls ages ago,
and with every new day this bond just grow.

Are we soulmates, and do we really care,
Did we just get used to each other being there?
The answer is not clear to our very own mind'
and only life will tell as our path spiral and wind.

One thing is for shure, and this you should know.
Not will we be seperated, no matter how hard that wind blow!!
Love luck and Lollies
A.

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Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
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1 posted 2000-05-20 02:27 PM


Another re-post.
A.

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
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2 posted 2000-05-21 05:20 AM


I find myself relating to the first and second verse in very differnt ways, for very different reasons. Now that I have confused you...lol, I think that all too often we just get used to having each other around! I enjoyed, thanks.

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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3 posted 2000-05-21 05:35 AM


"but we dont walk hand in hand,
we walk heart in heart."

What lovely sentiment you have here...very nicely expressed!

~ Claire


 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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