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BrazilianGirl
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29

0 posted 2000-05-19 02:42 AM

If I could fly
I bet I d find my way
to be with you
forever and a day

If I could turn back time
I d do this all again
coz nothing can be better
than having you in my place

I swaer to god I wont leave you
for my own mental sake
coz you helped me become
what I am today

life without you cant be fun
no way,
without you honey
Im lost in space

I wrote this childish poem when I was thinking about how much I wish I could run to be with the love of my life. I imagined he was sitting right by my side when he actually is 1000000 miles away
thanks for reading

vphantom
Junior Member

since 2000-05-13

Posts 23

1 posted 2000-05-19 04:05 AM

beautiful poem, I can actually relate to the way you feel.  And yet your love is so far away, it is the distance between the two of you that makes the heart grow fonder.

                                Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the
   eyes confess the secrets of the heart.--
                                St. Jerome

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-05-19 04:15 AM

He is a SPACEMAN or a MARTIAN

By the way, Lovely sentiments expressed here

Regards,
sudhir.

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

BrazilianGirl
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29

3 posted 2000-05-19 04:41 AM

hehehe not a martian but just as weird!!!

I love him anyway! He is in North Dakota and I am all the way south in BRAZIL. So I guess... very very very far

thanks for the replies!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-05-19 07:15 AM

BrazilianGirl~
It can't be easy longing for someone so very far away ... just send your heart to him as you did in this sweet poem.

Distance is irrelevant to a heart.
You never know ....
Nice sentiments.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2000-05-19 07:22 AM

Come on up here, Brazilian Girl, to visit him. And visit me, too. In the meantime, send him this poem, He won't think it childish. Ele vai gostar.
Muito bonita, a poesia
Lindo, seu coracao
Abracos
Liz

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