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Our Kiss
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Our Kiss |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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Our Kiss She closes her eyes and I gently place my lips against hers, so soft and warm... I can taste her sweetness, like tiny drops of dew on the petals of a tiny buttercup. Our world intertwines, for a moment we become as one and the rest of the world is forgotten... Christopher M. Grimm Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
AHH...SUCH SWEET ROMANCE! Loved reading this one....so soft and elegant All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Jeffrey... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Chris, I want to know who taught you how to kiss?!?! LOL I love the whole poem...great imagery.  love & all, -Holly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChrisG~ Too tempting ! I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MMmmmuch sweetness...made me smell a waft of flower, held my breath, I did...lovely. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Serenity- just breath hun....lol Marge- I love temptations almost as much as I like to succumb to them... And Holly- practice makes perfect you know... thanks all... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Not sure I remember those emotions...LOL! I really liked your style here...very lovely, Chris. Marie~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Chris! Wow! Great sweet kiss and well written poem --- but, alas am warmed up, want some passion LOL  warmly, netswan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Chris, BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL Love, Cerenity |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
beautiful poem...i envy the gurl who mad that much of an impression with just one kiss |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
~Sigh~ It was absolutely beautiful. You captured the feelings a kiss evokes perfectly. I loved every last word .~Susie< !signature--> "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" [This message has been edited by Angel (edited 05-23-2000).] |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks All... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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