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Rainbow of Peace (Challenge of Lone Wolf and Jeffrey)
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Rainbow of Peace (Challenge of Lone Wolf and Jeffrey) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Is it possible for this to be true I had heard it but never knew Yesterday my heart shattered within me As you walked out of my life to be free I knew beyond a doubt I would die No glimmer of hope, with darkness I lie Never would I heal from this pain Only in death would happiness remain The rain began to fall on this dismal day I knew the sun would never again come my way My eyes closed....then re-opened in disbelief What??? A rainbow to mock my grief?? Then a ray of golden sun lit upon me It opened the eyes of my heart so I could see This was not the End at all But a beginning, catching me before I fall The pain would heal just as the rain will cease Love and Life will come as had the Rainbow of Peace |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Just as His promise has foretold A rainbow promise rests over hearts of gold. *Yours is shining brightly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A most beautiful read Butterflies. See at the end of a rainbow there is always a pot of gold and you surely found yours. Luv to you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Then a ray of golden sun lit upon me It opened the eyes of my heart so I could see This was not the End at all But a beginning, catching me before I fall The pain would heal just as the rain will cease Love and Life will come as had the Rainbow of Peace ----------------------- all we need is a hand up, all we need is love to call, all we need is to trust our selves ... all we need is fate to offer a soft place to fall. Butterflies and Rainbows ... my two most favorite things ...*smile* this is PERFECT as is the poet. love ya SS, jm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* Thank you much for reading  A beautiful promise it is.Tracie* Mine seems to be hiding in the bushes currently...lol But I will NOT stop the search Thank you for reading.J.M. You are the sweetest!! I'm thinking you are a rainbow in disguise ....goodness knows you are the master of disguise...  **AW hugs** S.S. Luv ya!!!The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Beautifully done! I really enjoyed it. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Superb writing, myfriend!!! You have exceeded the challenge as well. Love the story and what an end....gives me hope. Thank you!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ohh..."Yesterday my heart shattered within me As you walked out of my life to be free" How in the world did you know that's what happened to me yesterday? This is extremely sorrowful, but I enjoyed the glimpse of hope at the end. Something I definitely need to see right now. Thank you. *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great responce to the challenge....far exceeding in my opinion All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
CS* I'm so glad, thank you! LW* Your story of hope inspired me sweetie! Krista* I'm so sorry for you pain right now if I could I would fastforward to the rainbow for you! Thank you. Jeffrey* Thank you to you and LW for this challenge...and thank you for your kind reply. |
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