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Let's Call this One: Walt is Sad
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Let's Call this One: Walt is Sad |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I’m trying to make the best of this funk that I am in Falling upon deaf ears since I love to always win Each door in the house has been slammed shut with a bang If I won’t talk, just get mad, then maybe I should hang It’s silent that is for sure, now at least I can think I am wired I am tired I cannot even blink Wherefore is the justice in being mad at dear me Shouldn’t I be able to say I’m sad let me be Coffee tastes bad when you don’t know how to make it Everything tastes bitter when that’s how you take it And I can’t even say sorry for all are asleep How can I loose the funk if It’s me that’s the creep |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Walt, I hope you've lost the 'funk'. I don't think you're a creep.  ) Sue |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, cheer up, Walt, we've all been there...things will get better, they always do. Give yourself a HUG!  Love ya Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
<~~~~gave self a hug miss denise and thanks miss bear |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"everything tastes bitter when that's how you take it..." This is just plain Good, Walt---even with your way out style, you always manage to hit the nail on the head...described this feeling quite well... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Aww Walt! I hope you are out of your funk now. I think this poem describes the feelings very accurately. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Good Poem there Way out --) Sad, bitter coffee -- hope you feel better. I was always told no matter how mad you are - never go to bed angry. But, things we are told, don't always work out --) netswan |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cheer up chappy, I hate to see a fellow poet down in the dumps especialy when it's someone who's as positive as you are usualy . Things only taste bitter if you make them like that, therefore believe that it's nice and you'll feel alot better and life will get tastier to . Liked the poem as usual it said loads and Serenity's comment about the nail on the head also hit the nail on the head when talking about hitting the nail on the head . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Get the funk wayouta here, walt!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Walt~ Everyone knows these feelings unfortunately  Great poem although you must be going through a tough time to have written it and I'm sorry to hear that. HUG Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ When you're feeling punk with a little dose of funk, give it chase you little booger ! All it takes is a spoon full of sugar ! *Plucking and grinning !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooooooo i think the funk is better now thanx to ya'll o yuh!! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh my gosh did you say a mouthful with this one....haven't we all been in a funk, slammed some doors and been the 'creep'...great writing my friend |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awww Walt! ~BIG HUGS~ We all get in this funk trust me. I was just in it for quite a while. I know it's not easy coming out of it, but trust me, you will. I too have slammed some doors, and said some things I shouldn't have. It's hard for others to understand. (One's in the household anyway) Keep your eyes up and remember to thank God, even if it was a icky day. I sure hope your funk goes away soon, I know it's no fun being there. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt, I hate being the creep too...makes you feel so alone. Loved the way you expressed all this, and can relate far too well. ((you)) more hugs for you... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
walt~ It's been a while since I read any of your poems or written any either. But from what I can remember from last year when we used to talk you're not a creep you're a very talented person in a funk. Walk, talk and write it away. I was formerly Augchic711. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Awesome look into yourself, Walt. And the bravest poets show us their true selves, which you have done here. Corinne |
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