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Forgive me Love..
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Forgive me Love.. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Forgive me Love, for my affliction, When I confused you with my grief, When I defended my conviction When I stood by my dull belief That Love must blossom first in woe, Then slowly grow into its skin. How much of love I didn’t know! How much of grief I haven’t seen! And now I recollect those days, When she was there to sympathize. The hope was shinning in her gaze, I loved to watch her with my eyes, Especially when filled with sadness. She watched me suffer with affection And pitied me, then I with gladness, Enjoyed to be in my dejection. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Master, I especially love the last two lines! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this much---I know the scenario all too well, and you've expressed it so beautifully...Par Excellence, sir... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ Sir, very well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Writtem like a true master. I enjoyed...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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