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Master
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0 posted 2000-05-17 08:16 PM


Forgive me Love, for my affliction,
When I confused you with my grief,
When I defended my conviction
When I stood by my dull belief
That Love must blossom first in woe,
Then slowly grow into its skin.
How much of love I didn’t know!
How much of grief I haven’t seen!
And now I recollect those days,
When she was there to sympathize.
The hope was shinning in her gaze,
I loved to watch her with my eyes,
Especially when filled with sadness.
She watched me suffer with affection
And pitied me, then I with gladness,
Enjoyed to be in my dejection.


© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-17 11:02 PM


Great poem, Master, I especially love the last two lines!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-05-18 12:55 PM


I enjoyed this much---I know the scenario all too well, and you've expressed it so beautifully...Par Excellence, sir...
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3 posted 2000-05-18 06:34 AM


Master~
Sir, very well done.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 2000-05-18 06:40 AM


Writtem like a true master.
I enjoyed...thanks
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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