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The Little Angel
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The Little Angel |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
The Little Angel The mornings here... the pillows bare... the little angel... I sent to care.... Find her a place... find her a home ... find her soft glow... beneath the dome... Take her sweetly... take what she gives... take her smile... while she kindly lives... She's very small... she's easily lost... she's there to care... at whatever cost... Blest you are darling... blest with no clue... blest you are always... because I love you... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That was beautiful Destiny, you must love your little angel dearly as you seem to be taking great care of her. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~a very delicate beauty to this poem~~ nice writing! Thank you for reponding to my poem. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Brian, Thank you for your kind compliment, this poem is not about a child though, but I can see how you thought that. It's interesting how we can write something one way and someone else see's something totally different. Danny, Thank you, and your welcome. |
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