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The Sage
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The Sage |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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The Sage Once in a lifetime we meet someone, with luck it may happen twice, with charisma as karmic as the sun, influentially ferrying advice. He has no personal gain in mind, speaks to synapses of your core, at times the prose is all but kind, for this you love him even more. A swift kick in the bum one day, sweet kiss of harmony the next, caught betwixt go away and stay, Juxtaposed edges of love and sex. Call upon his spirit now and then, even though he’s gone from view, he’s waiting for you beyond the glen, in that place between old and new. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Lovely poem, the way I'm feeling at the moment to fall in love isn't difficult, the difficult part is geting loved back in return . This poem has depth, passion and rythem . Keep up the good work . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This poem was enjoyable reading. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Tom and Danny. Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, an unusual chap this Sage, kicking and then sweet harmony, kinky "S&M". Such open mindedness, its shocking I tell you, innocent little minds like mine can't be reading this stuff. Oh, I don't know what to say... Well anyway, this poem is wonderful, and Juxtaposed... I wouldn't have thought of using that word in a poem, but you sure do it well. It all sounds wonderful, your lucky sweet poet and twice even. Get ye to the glen, then, a bard of unquestionable character awaits. Oh, don't forget your leathers....  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne, I appreciate this dedication to me so much!!! Thank you!!! I'm here....beyond the glen.. Oh, and I love the poem, too  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Corinne, I think I know him!! LOL.....seriously, great piece. I love the thought of meeting this sage one day!!! Very enjoyable read. |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Wow... I really like the last verse.. stanza.. lines.. whatever. Over all a pretty cool poem. Thanks for the oportunity to read it. =) --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Parker, funny, I've never thought of your mind as "innocent." - Thank you for the um, well, compliment? LOL And, FYI - I don't own any leathers! Except one leather jacket, and it's tan in color, not exactly S&M stuff! Balladeer, my sweet deer man, however did you know? Lone Wolf - a very special one, he is! Dave - many thanks. Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, Corinne! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this very much, Corinne--you write beautifully. |
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