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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Agonizing defeat- Drapes her shoulder, In quiet whispers... Beyond the shadow- Sweet love lures, In all pureness... Like an old flame- Rekindled, Remade, Begging- For just... ~ One Breath ~ To renew passion Gone dry- But years before... With reborn vigilance- She gently breathes, In and out- Inhaling the essence- Of long ago love... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina, my friend~ You are just amazing, little one. A more open and honest young woman one could not hope to find. Your talent is growing as you 'grow'. One of the things I admire most about you is the fact that you're such a LADY of dignity !  Have a wonderful day and may all your tomorrows be happy. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Sis--I'm with "mom" on this one! This is pure soul--growing--lovely, Devina... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You still got it, Devina. This is pure magic. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beyond the shadow- Sweet love lures, In all pureness... Like an old flame- Rekindled, Remade, Begging- For just... ~ One Breath ~ ------------------ *breathe in* holding it... holding it... its too good to exhale... ahhhhhh perfect devina...a breath of fresh air. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
once again...beautiful |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
devina, simply lovely, my dear~! Your words are *breathtaking* as they flow through my heart. Lovely! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Dearest Marge- I thank you for the compliments...this open heart has seen more than it should, I assure you!! *still fishin like a LADY though*  Love you!!! serenity- Yah, me thinks Marge is always right!!! Thanks sis!!!Michael- I'm glad you think so, was sure I'd lost it along the way... JM- glad to be the bearer of fresh air...I need some right about now!!LMAO Rob- Beautiful eh? Must be getting better I see!!G* Thank you for that... Terry-Thank you for feeling me with this one!!! Take care!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
devina, such a lovely and well presented verse. The idea of breathing as it relates to love and life has always been one of my poetic favorites. So nice, this one. ~ Claire |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Breathe in me the breath of love...the breath of life. . ." Simply wonderful Devina. . . what more can I say? ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
What can I say that hasn't already been said? Beautiful work Devina. Jeffrey |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Claire-The breathing excersize came while on a journey of my heart...glad you know that one too! Sven- loved your addition there hun...say no more!!! Jeffrey- I can only say that my heart thanks you dear!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great piece and very descript! Nathan |
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