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Future Endeavors |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Future Endeavors Once just a name A face unseen A lonely girl Behind a screen She call's me "Pop Tart" Now she's more than a friend Is this right? Don't want this connection to end! Someday we'll eat cake together We'll walk holding hands You found me in Atlantis Now let's take one more chance She says "Here's to future endeavors" I say "Future endeavors indeed" My kiss tells her "You're all I'll ever need" I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, I love it!! Challenge exceeded, m'friend!! How romantic...sigh... Great writing!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Tank yee, Lone Wolf....Still waiting on your poem for my challenge to you though...hehe All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ It's been a pleasure to see you 'growing' in your work. I like this, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Marge, I'm just glad I finally found a place that would let me "grow" in my work All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
sorry ....gota send it back to the top for those who didn't see it All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved your opening verse Jeffery, it left a sweet picture in my mind ... I hope you get to eat cake soon! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heres to having your cake and eating it too jeffery  great poem of anticpation.im still working on my challenge poem to you my muse is still testie LOL later-jeff-gator (hehe) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your too cute my little suthern friend. Marina |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Jeffrey, This is absolutely lovely! I love the way you captured the emotion of the heart in this one! Well done, indeed! Love Ya~ < !signature--> ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. [This message has been edited by TerryW (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet, Jeffrey! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
It's nice to find someone who fulfills your needs, wants and desires |
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