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Of dragons and angels
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Of dragons and angels |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of dragons and angels I ride dragons and angels down roads of fire and rainbow high to hell and heaven probing fact or lie. I ride dragons and angels steeds of the Gods to enigmas pry fires destruct faiths dogma to sense the how and the why. Heaven to purgatory, for the true of our story. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
That this is a bejewelling of words is fact, Seymour. Very nice... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Seymour!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Seymour~ This is just a tremendous piece. Wonderful, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was great!! I really liked it, you are very good! Good job... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I ride dragons and angels steeds of the Gods to enigmas pry fires destruct faiths dogma to sense the how and the why. Heaven to purgatory, for the true of our story. ------------ and you ride rhyme damn fine as well!! way cool poem Sy-guy... very cool. later poet-gator jm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! This is great, Sy. |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Most excellent!!!!!!! Words are my medicine. Read and live and love and heal! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Enchanting and thought-provoking Seymour ... I found myself reading this a few times! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...to enigmas pry..." what I do, when I read Sy! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WOW! I've been away - and what do I come back and find? SY and free verse! I LIKE, I LIKE!!! How ye be, oh masterful one? K |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ Wonderful ride Thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Among the dragons of your rhyme Flying through the fires of time In search of all the real and true It's nice to see an angel or two Great little piece Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW!!!! Great poem Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people above I can only say I am overcome by your wonderful response. One never knows the reaction of an audience and I was truly overwhelmed by yours. Once again my humble thanks and love. Sy |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fanatically fanatical fantasy, this poem was truly great, snappy, heart-felt and meaningful . I loved it and the way you used the angel and dragon as symbols was the mark of a true believer . I take off my cap to you ( if I was wearing one ) . Keep up your metaphorically methodical magic method with words . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I ride, Chariots with wheels of fire, spitfire from the dragon side, anger shown by nature's ire. I ride, unicorns with horn-rimmed glasses, Angels befittingly pay a tribute, The dragon spills into a glass, molasses, I ride, further beyond the horizon, With jupiter in my mind, leaving earth behind, Celestial beauties, stars gaze, so does the sun. I ride, ironically, don't even have a car, have a chariot to imagine, a horse to assume, The unicorn is simply a desire, to take me quite afar... --------- Hey Seymour, Words that you spill out from your heart make music to my ears, and art to my eyes, as I sit down and read this work, I *sigh*... Great Work, Regards, Sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I like dragons and angel too But more I like the poetry done by you I know I havn't been around But I had to sing a different sound Know, I read a lot from you Well done, this one and it's so true My time is short, I have to go But I like this poem even so The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
damn! you get better and better! i love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tom, Wonderful comment, thank you. Sudhir, And your poem was music to my ear. beautiful comment. Helmut, Nice to hear from you again, thank you much. Doreen, You are one of my favorites and your comp means a great deal. |
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