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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-05-16 07:41 PM

SEASONS

Where does the dream
of springs ending
begin to be summers
awakening
in lush and fertile
unfolding
forth the birth
of all things new
to fill the earth,
mind and soul
with hope of
harvests
dawning fullness
that bares the earth
to the kiss
of frosty dreams
of winters embrace
when opening her arms
to enfold
the endless desires
of spring?

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-05-16 07:43 PM

ellie, WOW loved this, excellent!
oh and this

that bares the earth
to the kiss
of frosty dreams
of winters embrace

Beautiful!

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 2000-05-16 07:50 PM

Ah, the cycles of changing scenes & desires which make up the Landscape of our lives!
How well you have captured the everchanging-always distinctive seasons in a thoughtful and inquisitive way. This is a lovely poem, with the imagery serving your purposes well.
Write on sweet poetess! David

LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

3 posted 2000-05-16 09:06 PM

How bountiful the words which sprung from thy lips! Wonderful verse. I hope to read more.

^_^ LadySofia

"To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." ^_^ LadySofia

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-05-16 09:52 PM

Ellie..this is lovely. It really flowed.. nice to see you posting in Open!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-05-16 11:45 PM

yes indeed, how very nice to have Ellie come play in this sandbox

perfect poem Ellie, written with your usual grace of captuing nature at its sweetest moments.
take care sweet poet
jm

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2000-05-18 05:39 AM

There truly is a circle of friends here at passions. I love you all for being my support and giving me the encouragement to do my best. Thank you so much! Love, Ellie

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Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-05-18 06:08 AM

I think this is the first I've read of yours Ellie, and I was enchanted with your flowing words ... I will watch for more from you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-05-19 09:42 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Ellie!

Denise

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