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~wings of an angel~
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~wings of an angel~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Is that you flying free with me tonight Touching my every being Is that you flying so free tonight Dancing under the bright moonlight I wish that I could be as free as you Flying high upon the evening dew Flying free, soaring so high With wings of silver reaching the moonlit sky You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair I've never seen anything as magical as you sweeping across the tree's Hair of gold, wings of an angel caressing against the breeze "goodbye my little fairy friend" I say as you take flight I watch you as you drift away towards the full moonlight Wishing upon every star that I could be just like you Spreading my angel wings and dancing upon the evening dew To all the fairy lovers out there I hope you like this  < !signature-->Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ah, Tracie, I love this ----fairies, we must keep them alive --what a fine job you have done. warmly, netswan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Like it ? I love it ! When little faeries flit across the night I am convinced that everything is more than alright ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tracie,...Fairies???....how could you not be tickled by their presence?....thank you for this sweet little read...I enjoyed it much. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tracie-- i LOVED this piece. faires are something magical indeed as are angels...i think we all wish at least once we could fly like that in the air. very descriptive poem that left me wanting to read more! great poem! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tracie, this is a very nice fairy "tale". ~~nicely done~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
netswan~ Thankyou Yes we must, my daughter loves to read these even though she is getting past the age of believing.Tracie~ Marge~ Lovely reply thankyouTracie~ Spitfire~ Tickled yes indeed glad you liked the read.Tracie~ Amy~ I've always longed to fly and be free somewhat like my spirit. I love to write about fairies purely because of the fantasy and notion that some poeple truly do believe they exist and maybe they do, I certainly hope so  Tracie~ Danny~ Thankyou your comments are always appreciated.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this Tracy! Such a happy and positive image ... you have kept the fairies alive, as they exist through your portrait so sweetly ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ Thankyou for your wonderful reply. This is what I hope to do, keep them alive in peoples minds with words. Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tracie* What a breathtaking picture you paint with these words you weave! "You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair" Awesome my friend!! **Angel Wing Hugs** The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Such a Happy poem . Brings a smile to my face. Yes I believe. Nicely done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, you never get past the age of believing in angels and fairies. . . they're all around us. . . Perhaps you know one. . . Excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great job Tracie lovely fairies All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Butterflies~ Thankyou for the angel wing hugs and I send then straight back to ya Thankyou for your kind words. Tracie~ Kitkat~ To a believer glad to make you smile Tracie~ Sven~ Yes I do believe I do Tracie~ Jeffrey~ Thanks my love back atcha.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair I've never seen anything as magical as you sweeping across the tree's Hair of gold, wings of an angel caressing against the breeze tracie...this is PERFECT!! wonderful magical poem!! love it great writing, creative and imaginative. jm |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janet Marie THANK YOU lovely, kind words from you. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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