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gnosis Junior Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 12 |
i am inside sugarland and trapped i wonder how to escape i hear them laughing i see their fingers pointed at me i want to be somewhere else or nowhere at all i am inside sugarland and trapped i pretend i'm unhappy i feel wonderful here i touch nothing i worry about leaving i cry when i see it from afar i am inside sugarland and trapped i understand that sugarland as a whole is a hole i say i need to leave i dream of escape i try to escape i hope to leave i am inside sugarland and trapped |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow gnosis son of doreen very good first post keep it up its exciting to see the mind of a great poet and her offspring too |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Gnosis YOU have a great mom -- what a fun poem. Glad to meet you! Keep on writing! netswan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow.  Challenge well met I think, and very interesting I must say. I hope to see more from you. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was a clever response to the challenge. Was a fun read....nice meeting you. Take care and hope you post more of your work! Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very interesting, I like your style. Welcome to the Passions family...please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gnosis~ 'i want to be somewhere else or nowhere at all' Sometimes, it's a 'nowhere' kind of day ! Been there and will probably visit again ! Enjoyed your first post ... welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hello, J..... Nice to see you again..  .. Few of our Passionate folks know what a good poet you are, because they weren't with us in the "day of the blue page"... hehe... I'd really like to see you post more - You've got the rhythm, ya know???.. Keep 'em coming, my friend... |
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gnosis Junior Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 12 |
thanks for all the nice responses! i really appreciate the welcoming. and thanks to you Nan! i may write some more to post on here. everyone can check out my site http://members.aol.com/jasonschm/ i've got some lyrics on there.. unfortunately you can't TRULY enjoy my poem unless you live in sugarland.. it's funny and sarcastic and true and serious all at once... i guess it's one of those "you have to be there..." type things... but thanks for understanding hehe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,..I've read this one over a few times now....truly enjoyed it. Great post. *I am inside sugarland and trapped*  Coolness what ever that may TRULY be.hehe. |
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