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Rain Song Haiku |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~*RAIN SONG HAIKU*~ 5-7-5 Rain's graceful lyric carefree in spirit it sings God's soothing love song By Melissa Honeybee |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful Haiku...so much said in so few words!  ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I love your poem.!!!!!!  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Mmmm,...beautiful. Simply marvelous.  |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, This is a terrific Haiku! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely! Corinne |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you all for the kind replies. I just love writing haikus and senryus. This is one of my favourites that I have written because there is just something so calming and soothing about rain. Instead of seeing rain and the storm that follows as a bitter force of nature, I choose to see it as beautiful Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You KNOW I love this. I agree with you on the gentle fall of the rain ... not too keen on those violent downpours though. As I type this ... the gentlest of rains is pitter-pattering on the roof ... romancing the window pane. Whoa ! LOOK WHAT I FOUND ! Romancing the window pane Softly comes the rain ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks for replying Marge, I knew that I could count on you to reply. And the haiku that you wrote was simply perfect! Thanks for writing it! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You do these very well, Melissa! This is beautiful! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
another winner i like rain too...i am one of those who choose to stroll in the rain,letting it cleanse my bitter soul while others scurry and hurry to fing shelter |
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