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She's Crying Today
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She's Crying Today |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~She's Crying Today~ Feelings of sadness surround pink tears falling to the ground empty sighs released attempts to mend ceased. ~She's Crying Today~ Alone by the shore thoughts of now wanting more hands holding head in distress feelings of guilt for being careless ~She's Crying Today~ Other plans got in the way but what could be more special then Mother's Day? Cries of choices made memories of smiles continue to fade. ~She's Crying Today~ *About my Mother and what she did this morning. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh how this rings loudly of sadness and disappointment, SpitFire. So sorry to hear of the morning you have had. I hope that the rest of the day goes much better for you. Glad that you could write about it at least...always helps. Nice expression. Take care, LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Yes this is a very sad poem indeed. It was a great read though. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thanks you two for reading and replying. I appreciate the time you've taken. Take care. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Spitfire, I'm sorry that things have not gone well for you or your mother this day. . . I'm glad that you were able to put it all down and get it out. . .that's important. . . Take care my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
give her a big hug, wipe her tears away... moms need that... well done, spitfire... thank you for sharing this. clearly, you have a talent for illustrating the world with words...  dp |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Spitfire~ I'm sorry to here about your morning. But one thing that I know is that mothers will always love you, no matter what. Take care. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven....thank you for your concern,...you are a kind friend. I appreciate you.  ~DP...Thank you for reading,..thank you for your more than nice compliment ~Dawn,...thank you for reading and responding. And thank you for your kind words. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is certainly a beautiful poem maybe next year things will be different  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SpitFire, Sad but good words, well done, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Hugs for you and your mom. The tears that fall from a mother's eyes always catch us in surprise ... just hug her ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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