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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Sing on storm Let your strength show the power of my love Flash lightning bright Shine with the fullness and illumination of my love Sound thunder pure Speak with the passion and story of my love Touch wind strong Caress with the tenderness and gentleness of my love Flow rain living Cleanse with the softness and silkiness of my love Sing on storm Let all of these show the depth of my love -------------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
*Sing on storm Let all of these show the depth of my love. ~How clever a concept,...how beautiful a poem....nicely done Sven. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi Sveetie---this is one of my favorite themes and you touched on it beautifully! Eloquent as always! Hugs atchya. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a wonderful poem.  There can be such beauty in the thunderstorm. I enjoyed this very much."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
mysteriously romantic, Sven. Corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, You have captured the beauty of the raging storm in this piece.....and the beauty of your love. Very well written, my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
...I will never look at a storm the same way again. Very beautiful, powerful thoughts you have put to paper; I enjoyed the read. Christina =^..^= |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sometimes I feel the depth of your love in your poetry is endless Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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