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Open Poetry #7

Perfection

soulfulpoet
Junior Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 42
ontario, canada

0 posted 2000-05-13 09:38 AM

It's 2:37 a.m.
I sit on a lawn chair,
staring at the crystal clear navy sky.
Every star is different,
yet they're all equal in their beauty,
and all equal in their ability to take my breath away.
I've been out here for hours,
yet all the clear nights wouldn't be enough to take it all in.
Right at this moment, the sky is perfect.
A beautiful shooting star explodes.
Maybe there is one perfect thing in this world.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-05-13 09:41 AM

I do believe that there is something magical in a sky filled with stars, they always remind me of angels or bright souls. That was a beautiful poem, though I think 2.37 am is a bit late to be awake.

soulfulpoet
Junior Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 42
ontario, canada

2 posted 2000-05-13 09:44 AM

haha I know 2:37 is late

but I couldn't sleep when I was writing this poem, so i decided to sit outside cause its so peaceful

REBECCA ALLYN
Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 91
Lima,Ohio

3 posted 2000-05-13 10:11 AM

I agree!! really good work but 2:37 is so LATE!!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky

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