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Sonnet written by a Klutz
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Sonnet written by a Klutz |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
the poetic klutz (sonnet) he tried to write sonnets in good meter dadum dadum dadum dadum dadum he really needed a children's reader dick, jane, sally, spot and puff that's the ones one, two, three, four he tried to do better he tries and tries but twiddles his big thumbs took his poem to a poetry leader she yelled out loud," dadum dadum dadum." he joined a class and they did laugh bitter it turned out to be hard and he felt dumb the klutz wrote a poem 'bout tree of cedar he was learning how to solve his rhythm and the klutz turned in his sonnet eager HIS SONNET thar was this buddy of mine had some hogs they was good fat hogs and rolled in the mud but this here sonnet is not about hogs it's about a green cedar tree named Fudd now this tree did not wanna be a log so Fudd waved its limbs at the early fog and Fudd called and signaled for its friend Bud well that thar Bud was a lumber jack's dog Fudd calmed his self down when he seed that Bud cuz Bud did lead his master to a bog now that thar lumber jack sank in that crud and Fudd reached his branches to hug that Dog now Bud was happy to save his friend Fudd But being a dog -leaped in bog like frog netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I had to read that one twice Netswan! What a picture ... the tree is safe and the dog's in the bog! Thanks for the fun poem! I enjoyed it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMAO..... AWESOME!!!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Teresa, When and if I stop laughing I'll come back and give a proper reply  This is just TOO funny. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOLOL Thanks for the smiles, Netswan ... Wonderful !!! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
This is just too funny ! Hey is that guy Fudd anybody I know ? |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Kit, Nan, Jeffrey, Pepper, and Dr. Moose thank for reading - I enjoyed writing this hoping for someone to find the humor in it. Thanks netswan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL!  Very cute. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tiz weird yuh hehehe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Now my dear, If you really want to learn to be truly Klutzie. I can  cast a little spell and transform your writing into a shape you've come to know so well, Well done.. |
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