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Better quit that smokin'
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Better quit that smokin' |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Quittin' smoking by a now crazy person! Yippee Yi Yay - Yippee Yi Yo no smoking is in this town I wonder how many sandwiches I can devour wonder if my stomach will blow up in all its sorrow yippee Yi Yay - Yip Yi yo_oooo! quit that smokin' is coming 'round when that no smoking 'rrives in your lovely town you'll think that PMS is the best joy to be found chew your nails - eat celery and carrots sucking lifesavers by the pound (or was that soothing chocolates?) ahahahahaaaaa! Yippee yi yah yippe yi yo oooooh! quittin' smokin' is comin' 'round Well, it is day number four and don't know if I can make it one more who can I kill? who can I smother? only know one important thing if you ne'er had tobacco at your lips do yourself a favor ne'er start so ya don't have to quit__Itttttt! Yippee yi Yah Yippee yi yo--OOO smokin' is a no ah no, ah no, ah no nooooooooooooooooooo! did I hit you with that balled up piece of paper did you hear when I said, do yourself a favor? don't start so you don't have to go through this You may think it is cool to see those cigs in someone's mouth - but to them it takes their lungs away _aaaaa! Yippee yi yay yippee yi yo smokers are all 'round - please let me get though one more day --------aaay just one day at a time--Timmmmmmmmmmmmme! netswan [This message has been edited by netswan (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I know where you're coming from unfortunately. I haven't succeeded yet, and am afraid to try again for all your "oh too memorable" reasons above. Your descriptive poem hits home Netswan! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMAO...... This made my day, netswan... I have to admit I'm a non-smoker - but I can still appreciate this one... Gigglin' here...  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Thanks for reponding Kit. You can do it. Nan - thanks for the comment. So glad you appreciated this one -----) netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Swan, This one I must keep As the day shall come When I too shall chant The Swan's YippiYiYa song! CocoBaci |
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