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eternally grateful |
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Deborahlee New Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 3 |
My heart was broken, tattered and torn, by a lost love who broke all promises sworn I felt like total darkness banned from the sun, after all of the work that he had done Then you came to me an angel in the night, and fought for my heart with all your might I truly believe God sent you that day, words can never be enough for all I want to say. It's because of you I no longer bleed, It's because of you I continue to breathe Thank you for beliveing in me, thank you for seeing the beautiful woman someone else did not see |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DeborahLee~ This is just lovely. I'm glad another has seen the beauty in your heart. New eyes New view Makes it all worthwhile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
I totally relate to poem because it reminds me how I feel about my boyfriend James. He put up with a lot to be with me and I am enternally grateful!!! great work!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Deborahlee! I'm sure your beauty wasn't too hard for someone to see! Denise |
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