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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
A Feeling… I have this feeling inside my soul. I wanna cry, but my tears won’t let go. I feel the pain of a broken heart. I can hear it shred as it comes apart. I don’t understand How you just fell out of love. You let me believe That I was the one. Can it be that I’m not who your heart sees? Is there another who has you down on your knees? Another who changed your path, Took you away so you couldn’t look back? Maybe I’m just jealous, But I can’t help but think That you’re in someone else’s arms Saying to her what you used to say to me. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Tears are flowing in this forum today. This is wonderful and very sad --- and with a person like that --- brush yourself off ----for one like that is not worth lovin' and tearing your lovely heart apart. You take care netswan |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Babeluv! It's a heart wrenching feeling and it'll occur in moments of separation. You can judge from the past events and if your friend had opened his heart totally to you and had not hid anything at all times you can believe him. As I believe my friend after few unhappy moments when I was weak. She's a wonderful person who showed kindness when I was a bit cruel. I'll never lie to her or see anyother person in the same way when I'm away from her. (((((Hugs))))))))) A_L |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh boy, kleenex box out near keyboard for me today. The feelings you've put to pen have truly come thru on screen. Thanks for sharing with me. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure many can relate to a broken heart. It's never easy....you have expressed the pain well. Denise |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Very,very good!!! your work is inspiring LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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