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Your Champion
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Your Champion |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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Your Champion ~First Knight~ Let me be your Champion, The one that fights for you. Your one and only spirit, Your Champion through and through. I’ll gladly stand before you, To hold the world at bay. There’s nothing I would not do, Nothing I would not say. I’ll slay the dragon called “Lonely”. I’ll carry all your weight. I’ll lift the burden of worry. I’m sure you’ll see the fate. Let me be your Champion, There is no cause to small. I would swim any ocean. Or climb any wall. Let me fly your colors. To battle I would ride. To fight for your honor With respect as my guide. Love, honor, and cherish. Things to give a wife. Give me please this duty To be Champion of your life. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Another masterpiece presented here, what a talent.  One day you will make someone very happy. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
some women say that men are not interested in romance. Thank you for proving that chivalry is alive. Great poem. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
First_Knight -- well done ----- ah to find such a champion --) netswan |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Your name certainly fits your words here. I think you are a "First" Class "Knight" all the way. I really like your work - you certainly don't disappoint Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh such words of kindness...thank you lost Dreamer quite welcome Brian Thank you Netswan Your far to kind Lori A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely and romantic poem FirstKnight ... and what a lucky lady to be on the receiving end of your devotion. Beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
First Knight. . . you definitely hold the standard high with this one. . . I believe that we all seek our champion. . . Excellent poem. .. ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Kit....and Sven A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is wonderful work here. A champion indeed...like this lots. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Spitfire A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, David! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Denise A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow! written to melt any woman's heart. "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah David...I'd thought I had replied to this one, but I guess not. You don't have to be a champion, just be the sweet,caring person that you are and that should be more than enough for any woman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice thoughts...and may you find the woman to connect them with. James |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I saw this earlier today and I remembered what a great poem this was, and had already read and responded to it, but thought JM's is doing your favorite poem you have ever written challenge. This is worth sending back to the top, and so it shall happen ~netswan |
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