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On Butterfly Wings(Haiku)
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On Butterfly Wings(Haiku) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
On Butterfly Wings Fluttering gently Wings the hue of fairy dust Butterfly beauty "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i likums haikus i did think they were p u back in grade school but i likes em lots these days and this one is exceptional as in good yuh |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I love Haiku...so simple yet they tell a lot. Yours is beautiful. I think I may go write a Haiku now...  ~Kelly  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 You flutter beautifully ESP  |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***esp, this is so elegant! well done! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
nice haiku |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Stunning are your words Beauty in flight among us Fly, Butterfly ... fly Love ya' gal ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
I love haiku's. but I never could write them maybe I'll have a go later. P.A. Do you feel the way you hate, Do you hate the way you feel, -bush- |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for your replies everybody! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Lizzie! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yours is truly a beauty too |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done haiku, Lizzie. You painted the butterfly beautifully. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Your haiku flutters across my heart, I love butterflies and you express the magic of them so well! Melissa~ |
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