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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Soulmate? You looked into my eyes so softly, With a smile I'll never forget. I'll always remember that moment, On that special day we met. Through these years we've made Some wonderful memories together. We've talked about almost everything, And it seems like I've known you forever. We've spent so much time apart, Living our lives on our own. Yet every time I look into your eyes, I know our special bond has grown. We've never been able to let go Of this unexplained feeling we share. It's a common thought, glance, word, or song That's always kept it there. We know the strength of our feelings, For we've struggled with them for so long. And by believing in what's meant to be, Someday we'll know exactly where we belong. Above it all, there's nothing in the world That could ever make us forget The magical feeling that we first shared On that special day we met. Oh please tell me fate, is he my soulmate? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
It he is not.....you will always wish he was. This is lovely..  A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
AWESOME!!! You put such feeling in to your work, can'twait to hear more!!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think when you find your soulmate, you will know...you won't have to ask..  |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
Lori- This is a great poem. I hope you're one of the lucky few that do find their soulmate, if you haven't already. -Tom Work like you don't need the money, Love like you've never been hurt,and dance like nobody's watching- Anonymus |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Lori* This is beautiful and I'm hoping for you that the answer is YES Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Lori, like deVine said, you'll know. . . just hope that you're listening when that voice calls. . . This was a great poem. . . I can feel the confusion and the hope in it. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Lori! Its a nice one. Sincerely A_L |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We've never been able to let go Of this unexplained feeling we share. It's a common thought, glance, word, or song That's always kept it there. We know the strength of our feelings, For we've struggled with them for so long. And by believing in what's meant to be, Someday we'll know exactly where we belong. ---------------------- yeppers yeppers... sounds like soul-mate heaven to me *smile* perfect poem of devotion. take care girlie-girl, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
lori~ I have a very dear friend that is going through the same question right now. He wonders if he has missed his soulmate, like two ships passing in the night. I must say the same thing to you that I said to him. A soulmate is a soulmate -- from the very core of your soul. When you meet your soul mate, you will know it without a doubt. And you will meet, for your souls will be drawn together. Tis the magick of the heart that guides you! (I know, he always says that I am over optimistic, too!) ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice thoughts here...if I had someone I was that crazy about I would say close enough. James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely and flowing sentiments Lori ... a soul mate is a wonderful find ... beautiful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
hee, confusing, huh? describes a lot of powerful feelings that are hard to sort...i like it!! |
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