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Open Poetry #7

Thoughts of you

msstt
Junior Member

since 2000-05-03

Posts 23
Huntington,Ind

0 posted 2000-05-10 03:32 PM

The hurt and the pain.
With each and every word I read.
Feeling I should hang by a thread.
And I did read and read.
To only feel the dread.
As if I were loosing my head.

The thought I was loosing you.
Only made me sad and blue.
And all of my thoughts fealt so untrue.
If only I could see through.
The thoughts of you.

Tricia

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-05-11 02:53 PM

An interesting poem, I really loved the first verse, is it about reading a poem you wrote for someone, about feelings you one had and the second verse is about how those feelings have changed? Am I missing the point? anyway great poem, look forward to reading more from you.

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

2 posted 2000-05-11 02:57 PM

I like this, liked the ending...great poem

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