Open Poetry #7 |
Green Velvet (a rewrite of an old oldie) |
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
dappled sundrops < !signature-->scattered by breeze rustled trees edge a meadow flecked with wild color, like the careless splatterings from an artist's brush over a canvas of green a winding trail, secreted and shadowed leads to this forgotten, verdant field in the sky above soft feathers of clouds float on azure June skies gentle spring zephyr's carry the meadow's fragrance to our senses as we walk slowly your hand in mine speaking of nothing yet everything ~~~~~ "meet me in our special place" was your whispered plea the place where velvet meets stone where lover meets lover a cathedral put there by God for two lost souls to find green velvet cradles us in it's mossy arms as our passion melts flowing like the brook nearby over the stones of trouble and falling over the waterfall of despair carrying us far, far away into that place where life cannot dim the love we share crashing thunder mimics the world's disdain for the passions they know nothing of and light like a stained glass kaleidescope shatters through me as you gently, so gently touch your lips to mine "Our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." --William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes, I like this one...may have to print it out just to keep it for good! [Ron hasn't brought the old ones back yet...so] Well done, XAngel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
X~ the pictures your words paint are so beautiful, gald I got to read it!! -SEA |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Wonderful with words you are!! this is really beautiful!! Lots Of Luv, Becky |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh, this was excellent. It seems familiar though. Have I read it somewhere other than here. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
T...Almost two years ago my friend was when you had seen this first. Go back to the beginning, to the start...there you will find the poem, much different..set in the fall, but the same in ways nevertheless. Ohhhh and thanks so much for your kind replies all of you I appreciate them so much! ~Heather |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I really love this, angel.. and i think i remember reading it before... in some form thanks for the repost... as always, fine writing! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
X~Angel~ This is stunningly beautiful. The images leap off the page and catch me in raptured delight. I enjoyed the scene very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oooh....*sighs* Soo beautiful...the imagery flew me off to this stunning place with ease and grace..a masterpiece, X Angel. *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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