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Little redwriter would like input (please)
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Little redwriter would like input (please) |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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My daughter is 12 and any comments you would like to make to her would be so appreciated!! The Spring Fairies They dart around These little fairies Bringing plants into the world Fighting over who gets to make the next bud bloom They fly so fast and high you can barely make out their figures They fly around the world, going higher and higher, Until they soar back down, To finish their work, And when their tired, they're really tuckered out, They fall asleep in their little dandelions Until next spring, When their needed again Kathyrn Carew copyright 2000 *** mom is soo proud! (grin) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sounds like "Little Redwriter" will be a great song writer one day soon. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you Jeffrey!!... (and thanks for all your help yesterday on my lyrics) you're a real sweetheart of the truest nature.  Kay-lynn |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sweet Poem Kathryn -- Your mom should be proud! Thanks for sharing -- and reminding about the fairies and how they work so hard in the spring and summer -----well -- will knit some itty bitty blankets for their winter snooze ---) to match the color of dandelions as they snuggle in netswan |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Simply marvelous...really,..this was great,...and in perfect time for where I am A talented little bud,...in the process of blooming...hooray!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is great, Kay-Lynn! Your daughter is talented....guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Tell her to keep writing...that;s the best way to keep getting better....and I'd like to see more of her refreshing poetry. Thanks for the URL. Magnificent!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathryn~ Enchanting !  May the Faeries of Delight light your night with dreams. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a perfectly sweet poem for spring! Kathryn should keep up the great work ... her talents are blossoming! Best wishes, /Kit |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
What a talented family! Your daughter is quite creative and inspirational. And she can only improve! Wow, I can't imagine how wonderful her poems will be then. Both of them I've read here are definitely enjoyable. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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