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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Sequestered spirits sway Sleepless nights, days Ferries follow streams To crystalline dreams Starry eyes ablaze Waiting our lives long The heart’s divine song Intoning desires With all that inspires Love will come along Travelling nighttime skies Turning planets at sunrise Wishing-wells fill with coins Shattered heart rejoins Hopelessness fades and dies Ascension, finally free flying Featherlight, weight defying It was always within reach Holding sand on the beach Love for us undying And in His repeating song Sung to us the nightlong Love will come along © 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem. It touched me deeply... great work. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautiful beautiful poem Corinne  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Beautiful is an understatement!!! Jeffrey |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I hope so, cause I've been awaiting too long. Until then can I interest you in a polka, or a Tango under the Moon. The night is so young, I see stars in those eyes, and just one kiss......... Don't wake me up please, from this sweet dream, that you've dreamed, cause I'm waiting, for the steam. Great Poem Corinne, I think I need to dream now. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ This is really pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderful - And - I surely hope so..  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Corinne! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
LoveBug, Rex and Jaffrey, thank you! A pretend polka with parker, hey partner! (Thanks for the sweet words, James) Thank you, Marge, Nan (and I'm sure of it, Nan) and Denise! Corinne |
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The Celtic Sage New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 8 |
Ascension, finally free flying Featherlight, weight defying It was always within reach Holding sand on the beach Love for us undying Very Nice, TCS |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Intoning desires With all that inspires Love will come along" Beautiful writing, Corinne, and so inspiring to read. ~ Claire |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you much, TCS and Meadowmuse! Corinne |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Corinne, Rick promises some are made some are kept some are broken some just fade away some cannot be kept they're like library books checked out and then returned then there are the rare ones these are not made they're not kept they just are this promise is... this love is... timeless © RAM 6/7/95 [This message has been edited by RAM (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Corinne! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne, this poem is ok, I guess, if one likes beautiful words, excellent form and a good message. Otherwise, it ain't so hot! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corrine, I am always so impressed by the way you write...this is wonderful! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for the special poem, RAM. Thanks, Lizzie! Balladeer, you are such a dear! Thank you, Martie! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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