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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-09 03:13 PM


Crushed

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Martie
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1 posted 2000-05-09 05:32 PM


The termoil of the human heart hurts..but

Everything changes...it is the grinding of life that displays the precious stone and changes the rough thrown branch into smooth art...out of chaos comes life...I think...

and then there's, without the storm who would appreciate the calm?  Hugs!

lucky
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2 posted 2000-05-09 05:58 PM


Martie'

Your so touching... where's my flowers..? I love ya bubba...

 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho
3 posted 2000-05-11 02:00 AM


You are my life, my love, my reason for living.  You are the one who tenderly keeps on giving.  Without you I would crumble to dust.  You're the only one in the world I truly trust.
~ ~ ~
I love you, my dearest husband.

lucky
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4 posted 2000-05-12 03:37 PM


Thanks Sweetheart,

It's nice to know I am needed... But there's just one little thing I've got to tell you... do you remember the other day when we were down the street around the corner and down about half a block having a drink somewhere's about four O-clock I forgot to tell you I need you too.

Mush love Lucky Dale

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 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name.  (Michelle A. Bartley)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 05-12-2000).]

brian madden
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ireland
5 posted 2000-05-12 03:46 PM


human Identity is something I often explore in my poems but I could never write so elegantly and with such stunning images as you have just done. Truely amazing.  
lucky
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6 posted 2000-05-12 05:34 PM


Ahh Brian,

But you Irish have all that gorgeous green and not to mention, I love those redheads and the accents melt my heart. I think I better button my lip, my Scotish little Swed is gonna ring me neck.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

REBECCA ALLYN
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since 2000-05-09
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7 posted 2000-05-12 05:36 PM


You are really good!!!
WANT TO HEAR MORE!!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
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8 posted 2000-05-12 05:47 PM


Truly your style of expression in writing is a jewel.  I greatly enjoy reading your poems and I look forward to seeing more.
CocoBaci

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