Open Poetry #7 |
Meeting |
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
Meeting chair's folded night's through what the heck's a girl to do? she may slip while you're away off the wagon another day. support on legs with lips to speak salvation is all she seeks the coffee stale the doughnuts old she doesn't fit into your mold needs more than a meeting to conquer the urge needs ears to listen to her purge. security leaving through the double doors walking in to the night allowing her to slip from the light. alone is the worst secret voices speak aid and salvation is all she seeks. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi S ! Thats beautifully expressed. We all seek salvation at one time or another. Patience is all we need and fear is all we need to conquer. May god be with you in all your troublesome times Sincerely A_L |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you AL for your heartfelt response. The meetings aren't for a substance abuse,...just so's you know. More of a self destruction fixer thinger...yeah,...something like that. But honestly,...your reply meant lots to me and I wanted to thank you for that. Really,,...I am holding onto what you said in my heart [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
very good poem....mysterious to me but it was good...hope to see some more of your poems Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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