Open Poetry #7 |
The Love |
Sunshine
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The Love Permit me, sir, the pleasure to place myself tranquilly by your side, my love, to inhale your quintessence of soul, and marvel at your spirit, that which allows me to feel whole. Idle I’ll not be, but bask in your words, refraining from speech myself, so the timbre of your voice will overtake me, caressing my heart and mind, as possession of my soul you make. Naught that I need you, I do abhor the need of others, but that I desire you, and I would share you with no other, as you would not share me; nay, neither we want to love another. Take up now to you the twenty years and face me, seeing through the tears, the younger woman ‘twas once I, and will ne’er be again, but through my mind that vision of womanhood you first did find. And so, should twenty years more come to pass, would you know in heart that this lass is only young then in your view but know now, and always, in her heart there will only remain memory of you. 18 April, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Sunshine. A wonderful poem. |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Mike... |
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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love knows no age, Sunshine. It is simply forever when found true in heart... you will always be young in Love's eyes. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Your muse is whispering beautiful thoughts in this piece. That's being in touch with deeper self. Lovely work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely indeed, Sun ......... Beautiful writing here ..... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Sunshine
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Michael, we can only hope, can't we... Marge, no struggle to write this, as this is what I've been trying to do for some time, and it finally started seeping through...thanks... Pepper, thanks as always... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, I am so glad I did not miss this one it is so beautiful, very beautiful, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The beauty in ones heart never ages. Nice writing Sunshine. |
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Sunshine
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Cerenity, Danny, thank you for your lovely comments... |
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