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Open Poetry #7

I See You

eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-05-09 05:40 AM

I saw you in my heart
and my heart leaped

        I saw you in my mind
        and my mind raced with thoughts of you

                  I saw you in my eyes
                  and my eyes sparkled with joy

                   I saw you in my life
              and my life was a dream come true

I saw you in my love I gave to you
  and I gave it more and more to you

   I saw you with me
  and I saw nothing else

  I loved you
  and I saw you love me too..........

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-05-09 05:51 AM

You've shown wonderfully that love is "not" blind ... lovely poem EyesPlus2 ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Brandyn Sand
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since 2000-04-21

Posts 82
Columbia, SC

2 posted 2000-05-09 07:27 AM

Very nice!

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

3 posted 2000-05-09 07:40 AM

***eyes,
it has been one of the best experiences in my life to look into my partners eyes and to be able to see that he loves me.
you have mirrored this feeling so well.
well done.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-05-09 09:05 PM

Sigh! A love poem..nicely done!!

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