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Shine Cut Edge
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Shine Cut Edge |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Rusty truth does shine. It's edge cut from me my lovers end, and shall go upon my cheek the last of tears I will weep. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Concise and powerful. great poem. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The pain and suffering that love begets, and is it worth the rusting tears? That is the question that you have so artfully posed, I believe. Lovely expression, this. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much emotion ... spoken eloquently ... in so few perfect words. very nice work. love your screen name. very cool take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very powerful, sharp as a razor. Well done. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i am so thankful for all the reaspons, i will gladly, be reading you'rals work as well, thank you so much for the encouraging words. kindly, redbraids |
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