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We cant go back anymore
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We cant go back anymore |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Today a girl comes forth From thin air, blown into my life She taunts and teases, as to say She is in need of a man like I All this right out of the blue She praises my every move, Takes intrest in all the same as I Always talking sweet to me As if to say, I want you All this right out of the blue Now a question I must ponder Is that of love or friendship We have past the point of no return Its all or none, my heart informs All this right out of the blue Her gaze meets mine, we dont avert Our eyes stay locked, as if in parley Over our problem, of love or ...... It dawns on us... There is no or, we cant go back anymore < !signature--> Lucidity is the answer to all problems [This message has been edited by Lucius Cade (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Great poem, but whatever it is, I would be wary of such quick motion.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Aye, I know it is quick, but she is so persistant...... Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A relationship where we jump right to intimacy is definately different from one that is slowly built upon friendship. As you say it is hard to go back...probably impossible. The feelings can be so intense in the beginning and then 3 months or 6 months or if it last 1 year down the road what is left of the relationship. That is when we can really get in touch with our feelings more clearly. James |
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