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Standing.... (needs one more verse) HELP!
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Standing.... (needs one more verse) HELP! |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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Audio available upon request.. Im going to be singing this next Sunday.. I need one more bridge.. to match the rymthm of the one I have... (think of how you felt when someone left, or died,, and you didnt' get to say goodbye.. you just saw them yesterday, (like the parents of the columbine students) STANDING You left me standing here with my heart holding back it's tears and now i'm standing here holding on to you And now I'm standing here minutes turn into empty years my mind is lost by my hearts holding on to you..... (bridge) My senses are useless my body is numb, no emotion left everything's frozen in that one moment in time.................... (last verse) Don't think that I can move where would I go without you I don't know what to do so I keep standing here...... (please request audio if you know what i'm trying to accomplish here.. the melody and words.. are both trying to express how you stand there.... numb... not able to move.. just.. "stuck" in time) but I need another bridge lyric.. that follows the "hopeless feeling of.. not knowing what to do" Thanks guys!! Regards, Kay-lynn www.mp3.com/kaylynn (check out my 3 new demos if you get a chance, "higher ground" made it to #16 on the charts!!) xoxoox Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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"My only oath is to stand still, promise never to go back... but to stand alone, tho on my own, without you all I feel is lack..." |
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