Open Poetry #7 |
Another day |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Another day The rain that played my window pane, Instituted within my brain, A delicate state of whimsy. The process of a waking state, Activated a little late, Never the less struck me dimly. And a subtle smile grew my face, To think upon this sly embrace, Even though I thought it hazy. I upped the phone and call to work, And though I smiled a little smirk. I said the rain here, was crazy So don't expect me in today, I'll make it up some other way. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Seymour - Ooh, playin' hooky - I love it! And, you have an excellent poem to show for it, you miscreant! LOL! Thanks - I loved it! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"""Snuggling back under the covers""" {~,^} |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
hsystems, Playing hooky can be fun, thanks for the comment. Sunshine, I don't have to play hooky anymore, this is from the long forgotten past. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nothing like crawling back under the comforter on those gray drizzly days! This is cute, Sy! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, You better believe it. *L* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah heck, I wouldn't have went in either, Sy. But then I play hookie all the time. Good poem, thanks for the smile. Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy I always knew you a little devil That you would instigate a revel And always thought it somewhat odd This prim and proper nice facade You are a treasure, but otherwise A little devil in disguise Great poem Love Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, You are welcome on the smile. Elizabeth, If you say so. Love Sy |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love this....spring (hookey) fever is in the air....great poem |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hehe... Never thought about calling in "raining" before... I'll have to consider that one... |
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