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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697
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Sleeping, sleeping Gently sleeping My only defence from Weeping, weeping Weeping for a love I never had to lose Weeping over decisions I never got to choose Weeping for my future And for the darkest past Weeping, weeping, weeping How long can weeping last? Weeping for my family And they don't even know Weeping for lost friendships That never got to grow Weeping for those in need That I'll probably never see The only release from this Is hidden in my dreams Weeping, weeping Always weeping Unless I'm sleeping Gently sleeping < !signature--> "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, little LoveBug~ Hon ... a hug is in order. HUG Why do you weep so? E-mail me if you need. [email protected] You spread smiles to others ... keep one for yourself. You have plenty to smile over ! Write me if you need to talk to someone. I love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***lovebug, this poem is so sad, at the same time it's gentle rhythmn soothes and moves me. another fantastic poem from you.  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Love bug ; You really do have the your namesake don't you, this was a great poem, whity in it's simplexity with sweet love making us think, I love the way that this poem flows . You will always be loved . L.of.L. Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge- you have definently made me smile!  Thank you for your friendship. Mete- Thank you for youtr nice reply Tom- Thank you so much. You really made me feel better "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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