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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
Unforgiven , in a world of lies Promises broken, loosened ties One little lie, we drifted apart Unsolved problems, broken hearts Unspoken words, meant to be said We're all living, meant to be dead Unanswered prayers, meant to be real Cold hearted touches, that I had to feel Precious smiles, so full of hate Another child killed, a minute of fate Questions asked, no answers remain Broken hearts of emotional pain..... I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
Powerful poetry... awesome!!! intense and fine!! thank you for the read -pan |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Tia this is dynamite. netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tia~ Very powerful and intense read, even so I enjoyed reading this very much  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Such deep emotion in this one I love it All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~this was so heartfelt and deep. intense emotions screamed thru each words. great work u have here. take care. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
Thank you everyone for your compliments on my writing....bye for now Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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