My every desire, need, love

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Open Poetry #7

My every desire, need, love

galaxy84
Junior Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 18
Pa, USA

0 posted 2000-05-06 08:35 PM

Perfect?

Can he be?

Butterflies when he's near.

No words from my mouth.

Speech; none have I.

My heart races.

My mind restless.

Only thoughts of him.

He's perfect.

My desire.

My need.

My love.

I have searched

For him

Years gone by

With no luck

In finding him

Then he came

In my life

All I desire

All I need

All I love

Perfect

"Comes the blind Fury with th' abhorred shears,
And slits the thin-spun life."
-Milton

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-05-06 08:51 PM

Wow galaxy, Lucky You --)

netswan

galaxy84
Junior Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 18
Pa, USA

2 posted 2000-05-06 09:02 PM

thanks netswan. i think im in love. he's great.

"Comes the blind Fury with th' abhorred shears,
And slits the thin-spun life."
-Milton

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2000-05-06 10:00 PM

Such sweetness your poetry
True love has only one form in life
.. pure and kind ..

This is indeed enjoyable reading
CocoBaci

lorilockheart
Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 206
Alabama

4 posted 2000-05-07 11:40 AM

How inspiring love can be!

You are lucky.

I enjoyed this.
Lori

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2000-05-07 11:52 AM

I really enjoyed reading this one quite a bit! excellent in form and presentation. you and the subject you speak of sound like you share a rare kind of love. Enjoy it! take care,
amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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