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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Cerenity's Rainbow ~*Marge Tindal*~ Far off in the meadow the glow of colored hues Enticing you to climb sharing with us the view Within the soul of the poet hung in the moistured sky Prisms of light reflecting the glowing rainbow's eye Sharing light with the world beauteous colors to behold At the end of Cerenity's rainbow a heart of sheltered gold Not hidden and not hard to find if you follow the reflected glowing Cerenity shares the treasure of her heart overflowing *For a special, special somebody whose rainbow name is Cerenity ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A beautiful poem, I would also like to thank Cerenity for showing me the way here. May her rainbow continue to shine. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely poem which touches my heart. I look forward to reading more of your poety. CocoBaci [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-06-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, Marge, this is so beautiful! I'm sure she'll love it!! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Margie-girl this is lovely and sweet... written for someone who always writes and replies with sweet sincerity. much like the poet who wrote this one. beautiful poem. take care, jm |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
what a wonderful poem for a wonderful poet... so well deserved! fine writing, Marge.. thank you for sharing this! cerenity deserves this praise! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Well you've done it! you top all who have ever given me anything in my life. I took so long to get to this because yes (believe it) I was speechless, struck dumb, amazed, you know we go through are every day live's dealing with what ever is there in front of us, and we see it, feel it, and for the human in us we can understand because its right there touchable, but then someone shows you this much love and really cares whom you've never meet and they only go on your words that you punch into a key board and you start thinking what is wrong with this world because you can have such wonderful unseen friends real true friends out in the world but the physical world offers little hope, this is where the struck dumb comes in. So then im sitting here trying to find the most perfect words to explain just how so wonderful this poem is and how much it means to me, and there are no words big or powerful enough, so I love you and I mean it, and thank you, just simply thank you. Cerenity |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely.... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~, CocoBaci~, Denise~, JanetMarie~, Pandora~ and ESP~ I thank you all for sharing your thoughts with our Cerenity~. Cerenity~ Sometimes, someone comes along who is meant to be in your heart. I feel that the spirit moves us to know when that someone is meant to be a part of our lives. The spirit sent you and I to join on the path of friendship. So be it ... I love you too, my friend. You found just the right words ... May the sun greet you with the warmth of her smile .. you are someone worth knowing. Love to you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Marge, It's amazing how much of ourselves we reveal through poetry. It's easy to see how well you know Cerenity. Thanks for all your kind words. I am so glad to now know such a wonderful, insightful, and caring group of people. Lori |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How lovely of you to do this, Marge. Corinne |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ What a lovely tribute, you have a beautiful heart. You truly are a genuine poet! Cerenity is lucky to have a friend like you...or maybe I should say that you are lucky to have a friend like her Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely poem!!! The friendship just shines from this one!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've touched many people's hearts with this Marge. This is such a genuine and caring group of poets. Beautiful tribute! /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lori~ She's a delight to know. Thank you. Corinne~ Well, she's worth it. Melissa~ Reckon we're both lucky ! Thanks. PoetdeVine~ Isn't that just the way with rainbows .. they glow ! Kit~ Just wanted everyone to see what I see ... the Cerenity heart that reflects so many different shades of friendship. Thank you. HEY THERE, LITTLE CERENITY ! Love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Magre, These tears I have right now are tears of total joy. And the kind replys to your poem about me I didn't know how poeple veiwed me. I aways just think I am small and invisable to everyone, never once has something like this happened to me, I don't know what to say except the same thing, Thank you. Love Cerenity Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity. . . you are indeed a wonderful person. . . I know that I have read your poetry and been moved and impressed with the quality and the depth of your writing. . . You are NOT small and invisible, you are indeed a light and a beacon to many. . . as is so wonderfully shown in this poem by Marge. Marge, this is truly a wonderful poem. . . a remarkable tribute to a remarkable person. . . Beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You are so wonderful and full of love...you see far beyond what is written--between the lines is where you look to the sweetness, and that is where you found Cerenity's rainbow. Just one hug from you and everybody smiles. |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Simply beautiful...music of the heart. I look forward to reading more! ~Kellsue  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ You are NOT invisible to anyone who can see your rainbow. With such a tender heart .. you glow. Sven~ Thank you for your kind comments. She is a delightful soul, is she not? Martie~ Hon .. my goodness ... if a hug can give you a smile ... then I need to share them more freely. Thank you, sweetie. KellSue~ You will find the smiles in Cerenity's rainbows. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping this one for one very special lady who emailed me a FANTASTIC story today about a poem I wrote for her a long, long time ago ... that her son found posted at the Amtrack Station he works at ! PROOF POSITIVE that our words DO live on ! Cerenity ... bless you ... your rainbow continues to shine~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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