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This may not be a Sonnet ( But what the heck I'm already confused !)
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This may not be a Sonnet ( But what the heck I'm already confused !) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Un-aware of all the forms I sometimes vary from the norm In trying hard to get it right the words I use are often trite Forgive a lapse of memory if hard to follow I may be It could be worse I'll say in verse I could be you then you'd be me But that is Justin Sanity Instead of two we now have three And there-in lies the crux my friend it's why they say I'm 'round the bend When one and one add up to three It's hard to tell which one is me ! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Doc. Bet, you had fun writing this. but don't ask me what a sonnet is -- think it all written in ten syllables. songs I try to write in 6 syllables or 8 or 7 or nine -- and ditites maybe four See I am just as confused as you are ---) netswan |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL...Sonnet?? Where's a sonnet?? This is cute, Moose...   |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Though not a sonnet this is great As per the norm for Dr. Moose So please post more, don't make me wait Just set that poet spirit loose!  Denise |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
netswan , d , nan , Many thanks I stand corrected ( on all four of course )would you expect any less , after all I'm not a horse . Doc |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sonnets are easier to read than to write! And I enjoyed reading yours! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
If indeed you're 'round the bend it matters not to me, my friend for I'll enjoy your clever sonnet as much as if't had Shakespeare on it but then I scarce could comprehend a sonnet for I've never penned (one) ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I don't think this is a sonnet but it sure was funny! David2 |
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