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Distracted by Passions' Women
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Distracted by Passions' Women |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA 
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I took a reprieve and it was just DEVINA...er devine And now I know it wasn't wasted I met a FEMME FATALE, er a woman sublime And in my memory it's pasted. I sat down DSNYDER...er beside her And thought to pitch some woo. She told me in so many words "never" And that she didn't give a HOOT (OWL RN) So I journey to SUTHERN, er to the South To see what I could find there. And JANET MARIE was most nice to me And the SUNSHINE was always bright there. So I went to the MARINA and saw a great ship The ELIZABETH SANTOS was its' name. And then in the MEADOW I MUSED at my slip, In the IRISH ROSEs I'd wrote my fame. < !signature--> Â Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. [This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
lol....I love it, but you better edit quick you forgot about your "heart" *g* j/k....I really like it, gave me a big smile  [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
OOooooohhhhh....(blushing) - You even included ME!  How stupendous, how fabulous! (batting eyes at brother!) LOL This is very cute, and how creative you were to sit down and make a er....vacation out of us! LOL Now wouldn't you LOVE that, you in the middle of all these women!  |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
This is great, RS! And we DO have some wonderful ladies here, don't we?  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a wonderful and very cute poem Robert. i feel honoured that you have included me in your "distraction". A very clever piece of writing my friend! Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Well Rob, scince I made the top line, I have to say this was DAMN cute!! I have to agree with Gen here...course you'd be lovin it!!!!  Thank you for the grin this morning Rob!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
hsystems and Corazon -- Thanks Marina -- Glad you liked it. devina and Femme -- um...hadn't thought of it that way but now that you mention it...when can you all get here? Seriously...along with Marina, I'm glad that you all got a chance to read this, so I'm sending it back to the top for the rest.Rob |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
RSE, this was really creative. Some very nice places you visited. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Janet Marie is MOST complimented and thanks you for making her smile today...and she is most honored to be in the company of such an esteemed group of poets... and GEN TOO LOLOLOL( sorry, couldnt resist) thank you kind sir... take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Now how is it this perfect little gem was down at the bottom?......back you go! Marina |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've got a wonderfully creative mind, Rob! This is so cute! Thanks for including me in it! Denise |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
LOL..Very cute... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is just too cute Love it !!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
RSE - so very surprised that before my eyes my name appears, and I ne'er even thought you ever peeked in. Quite cute - and thank you! |
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