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Bread (repost from Critical Analysis)
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Bread (repost from Critical Analysis) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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As I step into the New World, Unsure, anxious and puzzled. As I take a few more strides Legs shaking, Confidence subsides. As I let my instincts give in, Momentarily lost yet no pain. As I feel surprised and bewildered, Wondering if this is all for bread! -----written on the first day at work--- *** repost from Critical Analysis *** In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Each passing day gets better, and eventually, so will the bread. We've all had those "first" days at work, know the feeling well. ~~nice writing~~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Sudhir wonderful first day on a job. I hope I never have to do it again --) thanks for sharing netswan |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very interesting - your name suggests you might have come here from another "world", and your poem tells of a new "world" we all know of - but the two together form a very intriguing picture. To be facing both new worlds at the same time would be a fierce and frightening experience, I would think! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
 Danny, netswan, Rosemary Thanks to all of you for reading this one. Warm regards, sudhir |
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