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A Million Stars (haiku)
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A Million Stars (haiku) |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Glowing bright at night Filling my eyes with delight Heaven's winking stars. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zelda~ Very, very nice A glowing star shines brightly In your eyes I see I like your Haiku/Senyru, my friend. Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I love your beautiful description of the stars!  Great job."We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Excellent description this is. I love it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A lovingly glowing Haiku well doneTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Thanks all. I wasn't sure if this was a haiku--I knew that the syllables were 5-7-5, but wasn't sure if the theme was appropriate. Thanks again! Z |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Zelda, This is lovely, very true those stars do wink at you, I have not got to welcome you to passions, so welcome its wonderful to have you here. Cerenity |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
There is something magical about the stars at night, each one a heavenly soul dazzling in a void of darkness. All of which you captured in that wonderful Haiku |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Zelda~ I have always been a huge fan of haikus and senryus. Your haiku glows bright like your beautiful description of the stars at night! Excellent work! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Great description of the stars. They hold so much more beauty than any of us can ever imagine. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Gee! Such nice replies!! Thank you all so much! Z |
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